As Mr Tugger says, there is plenty to work from here. The thing is what is your Scene & Story? Scene you seem to have but I fairly quickly start to think that you have no sense of what this is doing, where it might want to go.
Mixwise I think the string parts are overwhelming which would make it harder to work in as they take over.
It seems to need a new idea, probably strapped to a new instrument. What if there were a Gary Moore geetar, or an Acker Bilk Clarinet...?
I like helping to finish tracks where there are good ideas but it has stalled but the other person needs to be open or it grinds to a halt pretty fast. Several of those have turned into released albums.
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Mixwise I think the string parts are overwhelming which would make it harder to work in as they take over.
It seems to need a new idea, probably strapped to a new instrument. What if there were a Gary Moore geetar, or an Acker Bilk Clarinet...?
I like helping to finish tracks where there are good ideas but it has stalled but the other person needs to be open or it grinds to a halt pretty fast. Several of those have turned into released albums.
Statistics: Posted by Benedict — Fri Jan 31, 2025 6:16 am